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Commission: No Better Place to Argue

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Sketches: marikbentusi.tumblr.com/post/5…

Most complex commission to date I feel. 3 thoroughly designed chars as well as 2.5 background chars with a three-layered complex background and multiple light sources. Phew.

Originally most of the pic was just greys due to the character designs, but after some Homeworld 2 inspiration I decided to swamp everything in blue and red to make it more vibrant and dynamic. I kinda regret making the perspective so uninteresting tho. I kinda did it because I was so afraid of the complexity of the pic.

Self-Critique:
- boring Mcbland frontal perspective for the most part, no interesting angles
- perspective also leads to awkward foreshortening in places
- awkward composition and inconsistent lighting/shading
- bad textures
- clouds not cloudy enough
- silly cel-ing on architecture
- just looks very spongy in places because of how many layers were used.
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2686x1799px 1.66 MB
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